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by AnikeKirsten
Sun Jan 20, 2019 3:42 am
Forum: The Contest - Quarterly Topics, and Other Items
Topic: Discussion: Q2, Volume 36
Replies: 34
Views: 503

Re: Discussion: Q2, Volume 36

Perhaps looking at the overall character arc and narrowing it to the strongest development might help keep the story well below 17k? A basic character arc of conflict, agency, consequence, and resolution. If there's good room left, and the story needs to, it should be much easier to fill up after th...
by AnikeKirsten
Sun Jan 20, 2019 3:34 am
Forum: The Contest - Quarterly Topics, and Other Items
Topic: Moon's SUPER SECRET Bonus Challenge! Vol. 36
Replies: 202
Views: 2656

Re: Moon's SUPER SECRET Bonus Challenge! Vol. 36

I laughed so hard at the ST example. Well done, sir. Well done. As tempting as it is to delve into the murky waters of info-dumping, sometimes we just need to realise that our audience (first reader and judges in this case) know quite a bit about SFF and worlds and are more than capable of making de...
by AnikeKirsten
Thu Jan 17, 2019 2:23 am
Forum: The Contest - Quarterly Topics, and Other Items
Topic: Moon's SUPER SECRET Bonus Challenge! Vol. 36
Replies: 202
Views: 2656

Re: Moon's SUPER SECRET Bonus Challenge! Vol. 36

Wow! Congrats, Wulf, and may there be many more congrats coming! Been stalking Dave's blog, and read through so many posts before. All signed up for new ones. And yeah, markets continually advise reading what they have so this makes a lot of sense, and even better that it's broken down and 'splained...
by AnikeKirsten
Fri Jan 11, 2019 2:15 pm
Forum: The Contest - Quarterly Topics, and Other Items
Topic: Moon's SUPER SECRET Bonus Challenge! Vol. 36
Replies: 202
Views: 2656

Re: Moon's SUPER SECRET Bonus Challenge! Vol. 36

Runs his fingertips over the temple's ancient bas-relief. "Aziz, light!"


I see your 5th Element reference and I appreciate it. wotf022 Almost as much as the Super Secrets themselves.
by AnikeKirsten
Tue Jan 01, 2019 4:38 pm
Forum: The Contest - Quarterly Topics, and Other Items
Topic: Moon's SUPER SECRET Bonus Challenge! Vol. 36
Replies: 202
Views: 2656

Re: Moon's SUPER SECRET Bonus Challenge! Vol. 36

Plus, as an active commenting member, you're in the running for a critique on that one this Q.


Sold.

I should let it breathe in any case, see if there's something time picks up to improve it, haha. Oh, time, you wonderfully frustrating thing, you.
by AnikeKirsten
Tue Jan 01, 2019 12:27 pm
Forum: The Contest - Quarterly Topics, and Other Items
Topic: Moon's SUPER SECRET Bonus Challenge! Vol. 36
Replies: 202
Views: 2656

Re: Moon's SUPER SECRET Bonus Challenge! Vol. 36

I'm saying congrats to all who subbed because, like RSchibler said, it's a win in and of itself.

Nice going, Time! I'm with you there, almost ready to send it off for Q2. Haven't even thought of what to write for Q3 yet. Need to figure that out soon.

And happy new year's!
by AnikeKirsten
Mon Dec 31, 2018 6:11 am
Forum: The Contest - Quarterly Topics, and Other Items
Topic: Discussion: Q2, Volume 36
Replies: 34
Views: 503

Re: Discussion: Q2, Volume 36

Woot! Keep 'em subbing.

Got mine pretty much ready to go once I give it a final typoo and grammar edit pass. Onward to 2019!

And may the Force be ever in your favour.

wotf001 runs
by AnikeKirsten
Tue Dec 18, 2018 3:07 pm
Forum: The Contest - Quarterly Topics, and Other Items
Topic: Moon's SUPER SECRET Bonus Challenge! Vol. 36
Replies: 202
Views: 2656

Re: Moon's SUPER SECRET Bonus Challenge! Vol. 36

(Since we don't have a volunteer crier....) HEAR YE, HEAR YE! With less than two weeks to go, this challenge is about to close. Q1 looms. There's still time to join either the full four fresh stories challenge, or the three fresh, one previously written challenge. And there's one other benefit to j...
by AnikeKirsten
Tue Dec 18, 2018 10:58 am
Forum: Quarterly Results
Topic: Quarter 1 Writers and Illustrators of the Future Vol 36
Replies: 12
Views: 437

Re: Quarter 1 Writers and Illustrators of the Future Vol 36

Entered 19 Nov 2018. holds thumbs
by AnikeKirsten
Sun Dec 16, 2018 11:57 am
Forum: The Contest - Quarterly Topics, and Other Items
Topic: Moon's SUPER SECRET Bonus Challenge! Vol. 36
Replies: 202
Views: 2656

Re: Moon's SUPER SECRET Bonus Challenge! Vol. 36

Moon's SUPER SECRET #8: Kill "as you know, Bobs" in your story! What's an "as you know, Bob?" It's authorial intrusion, done through a character to make it seem okay. You think that by using this method, you're being sneaky getting information into your story that your reader mi...
by AnikeKirsten
Mon Dec 10, 2018 4:29 am
Forum: The Contest - Quarterly Topics, and Other Items
Topic: Moon's SUPER SECRET Bonus Challenge! Vol. 36
Replies: 202
Views: 2656

Re: Moon's SUPER SECRET Bonus Challenge! Vol. 36

Due to the enthusiasm Moon is showing (and the hallowed halls echoes, by the way congrats on the win, Moon!), I'm creeping out from lurk-mode to join this. My Q1 entry is already in and it's technically a fresh story (in that it was written to sub to WotF but wasn't ready for last quarter and thus r...
by AnikeKirsten
Thu Nov 29, 2018 1:48 am
Forum: The Contest - Quarterly Topics, and Other Items
Topic: 4 in 36
Replies: 32
Views: 822

Re: 4 in 36

I'm in. For as long I'm able to.

Already subbed to Q1 a piece I'd been writing and working on initially to sub to v35 Q4 but it wasn't ready yet so here I am for v36 instead.
by AnikeKirsten
Wed Nov 28, 2018 4:58 am
Forum: The Contest - Quarterly Topics, and Other Items
Topic: NEW USERS! INTRODUCE YOURSELVES!
Replies: 2540
Views: 466547

Re: NEW USERS! INTRODUCE YOURSELVES!

'Ollo! I'm Anike Kirsten, long-time stalker (in cyber time, so about 2 months) recently signed up and figured I probably should hop in with the amount of time I spend on the forum already. I'm from South Africa, living in a semi-desert area. Mostly into SF but I'm getting more into stories that blur...

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