V37 Q1 Entry Feedback

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WriterGirl0426
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V37 Q1 Entry Feedback

Postby WriterGirl0426 » Fri Nov 29, 2019 8:04 pm

I have a 5k piece drafted for a Q1 entry and would love some feedback. Happy to swap. Any takers?

--Tracy
Tracy

V34 Q3: R
V34 Q4: R
V35 Q1: R
V36 Q1: SHM
V36 Q2: SEMI-FINALIST!!!
V36 Q3: HM
V36 Q4: SHM
V37 Q1: SHM

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Re: V37 Q1 Entry Feedback

Postby RSchibler » Fri Nov 29, 2019 8:35 pm

Always, send it my way.
V34: R, HM, R
V35: HM, R, R, HM
V36: R, HM, HM, SHM
V37: HM, SF, P, P

ALWAYS available for critique. PM me.

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A Dying Planet, 2020
Hold Your Fire, 2021
Upon A Once Time, 2021
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Re: V37 Q1 Entry Feedback

Postby TimE » Sat Nov 30, 2019 1:33 am

WriterGirl0426 wrote:I have a 5k piece drafted for a Q1 entry and would love some feedback. Happy to swap. Any takers?

--Tracy


I'll take a look if you need a 2nd, Tracy.
Some HMs More Rs - I keep thinking I'm getting closer, but perhaps not.
CWA-Debut Dagger shortlist. https://thecwa.co.uk/colours/ (Still trying to find my genre - but perhaps it's scifi - and perhaps it's not)

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Re: V37 Q1 Entry Feedback

Postby WriterGirl0426 » Sat Nov 30, 2019 9:17 pm

RSchibler wrote:Always, send it my way.


Thanks so much! PM'd you with my info. :)
--Tracy
Tracy

V34 Q3: R
V34 Q4: R
V35 Q1: R
V36 Q1: SHM
V36 Q2: SEMI-FINALIST!!!
V36 Q3: HM
V36 Q4: SHM
V37 Q1: SHM

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Re: V37 Q1 Entry Feedback

Postby WriterGirl0426 » Sat Nov 30, 2019 9:18 pm

TimE wrote:I'll take a look if you need a 2nd, Tracy.

Thanks, Tim!
PM'd you my info and will definitely take you up on it. :)
--Tracy
Tracy

V34 Q3: R
V34 Q4: R
V35 Q1: R
V36 Q1: SHM
V36 Q2: SEMI-FINALIST!!!
V36 Q3: HM
V36 Q4: SHM
V37 Q1: SHM

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Re: V37 Q1 Entry Feedback

Postby SCAFontaine » Sun Dec 01, 2019 1:11 pm

Hi Tracy,
I'd be happy to swap if you'd still like more critters.
5 x HM
2 x R

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Re: V37 Q1 Entry Feedback

Postby TimE » Mon Dec 02, 2019 5:11 am

SCAFontaine wrote:Hi Tracy,
I'd be happy to swap if you'd still like more critters.


I'm happy to swap again, Sabine. Mine's in Scrib if you want to earn some karma.

If you want to send yours to me, I'm sure you have my mail.
Some HMs More Rs - I keep thinking I'm getting closer, but perhaps not.
CWA-Debut Dagger shortlist. https://thecwa.co.uk/colours/ (Still trying to find my genre - but perhaps it's scifi - and perhaps it's not)

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Re: V37 Q1 Entry Feedback

Postby glenn84 » Fri Dec 06, 2019 8:58 am

Hey all,

I'm willing to swap with anyone. Mine comes in at 4,200 words. Send me a pm if interested. Or email if you have it :)
HM x 7
SHM x 1
R - unknown

EDF

TimE
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Re: V37 Q1 Entry Feedback

Postby TimE » Fri Dec 06, 2019 11:29 am

I'll take a look if you wish.
Some HMs More Rs - I keep thinking I'm getting closer, but perhaps not.
CWA-Debut Dagger shortlist. https://thecwa.co.uk/colours/ (Still trying to find my genre - but perhaps it's scifi - and perhaps it's not)

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Re: V37 Q1 Entry Feedback

Postby RSchibler » Fri Dec 06, 2019 12:15 pm

Always
V34: R, HM, R
V35: HM, R, R, HM
V36: R, HM, HM, SHM
V37: HM, SF, P, P

ALWAYS available for critique. PM me.

Stories in:
A Dying Planet, 2020
Hold Your Fire, 2021
Upon A Once Time, 2021
2020 Writers of the Future Superstars Scholarship

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Re: V37 Q1 Entry Feedback

Postby Thomas Woodward » Tue Dec 17, 2019 6:40 pm

Happy to help, Glen. Feel free to email me. wotf008
5x R
7x HM
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"No subject is terrible if the story is true, if the prose is clean and honest, and if it affirms courage and grace under pressure." — Ernest Hemingway


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