Critique Request: 4100 words

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Critique Request: 4100 words

Postby WriteToLive » Tue Jun 19, 2012 9:05 am

I recently went though and heavily revised one of my stories (took out 2 characters and streamlined the story a bit). I would like a critique on it before I put it out in submission to see if the story is without obvious flaws.

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