I recently went though and heavily revised one of my stories (took out 2 characters and streamlined the story a bit). I would like a critique on it before I put it out in submission to see if the story is without obvious flaws.
Please PM me with your requests.
Critique Request: 4100 words
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Critique Request: 4100 words
Michael Beers
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Latest Out: Detroit Ex Nihilo at AESciFi
Now Available: Zion in For All Eternity: Tales of the Seven Deadly Sins (Dark Opus Press)
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