Critique Request: 3,000 words

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trdixon
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Critique Request: 3,000 words

Postby trdixon » Wed Jul 18, 2012 7:11 am

I'd like to get a few more opinions on Q2 HM before I send it out on its journeys. Anybody interested in a swap?
"I've seen things you people wouldn't believe. Attack ships on fire off the shoulder of Orion. I watched C-beams glitter in the dark near the Tannhauser gate. All those moments will be lost in time...like tears in rain...Time to die." -Roy Batty

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Re: Critique Request: 3,000 words

Postby Travesty » Wed Aug 01, 2012 12:09 pm

I thought I'd sent a PM, but I'll post here too in case I'm remembering incorrectly. :) Also, if someone else is interested, please send me a message.
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Re: Critique Request: 3,000 words

Postby trdixon » Wed Aug 01, 2012 5:19 pm

Sent you a PM
"I've seen things you people wouldn't believe. Attack ships on fire off the shoulder of Orion. I watched C-beams glitter in the dark near the Tannhauser gate. All those moments will be lost in time...like tears in rain...Time to die." -Roy Batty


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