3400 word critique of my Q3 semi

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3400 word critique of my Q3 semi

Postby dantzel » Tue Nov 13, 2012 8:56 pm

Having just received my semi-finalist critique, the feedback Dave gave me makes me want a few more eyes on this story before I submit to the next market - IGMS first. If there are any takers, PM or email me.

I'd be happy to critique anything that is somewhat similar in size, give or take a couple thousand.

Thanks!
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Re: 3400 word critique of my Q3 semi

Postby ThomasKCarpenter » Wed Nov 14, 2012 4:08 am

Send it along. I'll be happy to read it.
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Re: 3400 word critique of my Q3 semi

Postby dantzel » Wed Nov 14, 2012 12:02 pm

I was hoping you'd say that. :)

I'm working on your story, BTW. I think I can get it to you by tomorrow.
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Re: 3400 word critique of my Q3 semi

Postby ThomasKCarpenter » Mon Nov 19, 2012 7:28 pm

Sent it back to you last week. Hope you got it. If not, let me know, I'll resend.
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Re: 3400 word critique of my Q3 semi

Postby morshana » Mon Nov 19, 2012 7:31 pm

ThomasKCarpenter wrote:Sent it back to you last week. Hope you got it. If not, let me know, I'll resend.


Let me know if I need to resend, too. :)
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Re: 3400 word critique of my Q3 semi

Postby DavidK » Wed Nov 21, 2012 12:37 am

If you need another, PM or email it to me wotf008
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Re: 3400 word critique of my Q3 semi

Postby austinDm » Wed Nov 21, 2012 3:59 am

DavidK wrote:If you need another, PM or email it to me wotf008


Same.


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