Having just received my semi-finalist critique, the feedback Dave gave me makes me want a few more eyes on this story before I submit to the next market - IGMS first. If there are any takers, PM or email me.
I'd be happy to critique anything that is somewhat similar in size, give or take a couple thousand.
Thanks!
3400 word critique of my Q3 semi
- ThomasKCarpenter
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Re: 3400 word critique of my Q3 semi
Send it along. I'll be happy to read it.
Thomas K Carpenter
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SFx2, SHMx1, HMx12 (Pro'd Out - Q4 2016)
EQMM - Feb 2015 / Abyss & Apex - Issue 50
http://www.thomaskcarpenter.com
SFx2, SHMx1, HMx12 (Pro'd Out - Q4 2016)
EQMM - Feb 2015 / Abyss & Apex - Issue 50
Re: 3400 word critique of my Q3 semi
I was hoping you'd say that. :)
I'm working on your story, BTW. I think I can get it to you by tomorrow.
I'm working on your story, BTW. I think I can get it to you by tomorrow.
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Re: 3400 word critique of my Q3 semi
Sent it back to you last week. Hope you got it. If not, let me know, I'll resend.
Thomas K Carpenter
http://www.thomaskcarpenter.com
SFx2, SHMx1, HMx12 (Pro'd Out - Q4 2016)
EQMM - Feb 2015 / Abyss & Apex - Issue 50
http://www.thomaskcarpenter.com
SFx2, SHMx1, HMx12 (Pro'd Out - Q4 2016)
EQMM - Feb 2015 / Abyss & Apex - Issue 50
Re: 3400 word critique of my Q3 semi
ThomasKCarpenter wrote:Sent it back to you last week. Hope you got it. If not, let me know, I'll resend.
Let me know if I need to resend, too. :)
Jeanette Gonzalez
HM x4, SHM x2, F x1
HM x4, SHM x2, F x1
Re: 3400 word critique of my Q3 semi
If you need another, PM or email it to me 

Joined August 2011. 8 HM's.
Re: 3400 word critique of my Q3 semi
DavidK wrote:If you need another, PM or email it to me
Same.
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