Q4 rejected story

[Darren Hawbrook]

Hi
Just wondering if anyone wanted to swap critiques? I got my Q4 entry back as a rejection but would like to send it to other markets.

Word of warning, I've never done a critique before, but I will give it my best shot if anyone's willing to do a swap.

The story I submitted is 6400 word SF.

Darren

[Quinn]

Hey Darren, I haven't got a coherent short story down yet, but I'd love to take a peek at yours? Once I'm done, perhaps you can read mine too, but it'll be a while in coming P:

[kirbdor]

Hey,

this was my first year entering the contest and I'd love to get some feedback on my story. I haven't critiqued a lot of stuff before but I would be willing to give it a thorough read and send back my thoughts and suggestions in exchange for yours on mine. Be warned, it is roughly 10,000 words longer than yours. Let me know if you are still interested.

[Darren Hawbrook]

Thanks for all the interest in critique exchanges. I've had a great response and am actually going to have to turn down any further offers for now.