Second reader story exchange

[DavidK]

I've just finished a story collaboration with a fellow WOTF member, and we've ended up with a 6400 word story that is need of a second reader.

Don't need a major in depth crit, more after higher level views/thoughts of the story, although the first 450 crit comments are always excellent too.

Happy to read and provide feedback for stories around this size.

David