Not so short UF-horror-romance.

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Not so short UF-horror-romance.

Postby LDWriter2 » Sun Apr 07, 2013 7:28 pm

I could use some help finding nitpicks with this 10,093 word story. Not WotF even though I have thought about using it as such. Even though it has a vampire and a minor wizard in it, it's more a relationship story.


I'm sure the writing needs help but now I want to concentrate on the typos, bad grammar, really bad sentences, commas and such. Maybe cut out one hundred words or so too. But that isn't super important. If possible I would like it by Thursday but again that isn't super important.

Of course I can crit your story.
Working on turning Lead into Gold.

Four HMs From WotF
The latest was Q1'12
HM-quarter 4 Volume 32
One HM for another contest
published in Strange New Worlds Ten.
Another HM http://onthepremises.com/minis/mini_18.html

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