Critique Exchange 4,600 words

[bthomas7]

Hey everyone. So I read the rules and I think I'm not doing anything wrong, apologies if I inadvertently do. I have a 4,600 word science fiction story that I am debating entering in the contest or not. I recently (following several rejection letters on said story) rewrote the majority of it and tried to add depth and make it a better story. If anyone has anything around the same word count or a little more and would like to trade critiques please PM me. I like fantasy works too so the critique trade does not have to be science fiction. Anyways, I am not sure if I want to submit it to the contest or to other publications or really what I want to do with it yet, so I am really just looking for some feedback. Thanks!