Emergency crit?

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LDWriter2
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Emergency crit?

Postby LDWriter2 » Sat Jun 27, 2015 8:01 pm

Anyone up for a very quick crit for a story 11,000 to 15,000 words?

Mostly looking for bad commas and other nitpicks. Obviously since it's by me so the writing isn't prefect or close to prefect, but I don't have time for a complete revising so I will take my chances with it as is. Unless some sentence doesn't make sense that is.

I can of course do one back, even though not sure about grammar and such.
Working on turning Lead into Gold.

Four HMs From WotF
The latest was Q1'12
HM-quarter 4 Volume 32
One HM for another contest
published in Strange New Worlds Ten.
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Re: Emergency crit?

Postby elratliff » Sun Jun 28, 2015 4:21 am

I could do with an emergency crit as well. wotf001 I sent you an email!
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Re: Emergency crit?

Postby LDWriter2 » Sun Jun 28, 2015 9:29 am

elratliff wrote:I could do with an emergency crit as well. wotf001 I sent you an email!

Got it and responded.
Working on turning Lead into Gold.

Four HMs From WotF
The latest was Q1'12
HM-quarter 4 Volume 32
One HM for another contest
published in Strange New Worlds Ten.
Another HM http://onthepremises.com/minis/mini_18.html


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