I have started a story based upon a rather specialist area of knowledge (of which I expect the average reader to be utterly and quite justifiably ignorant) and I am unsure whether the amount of background that I've supplied is inadequate, excessive or possibly quite unintelligible.
As usual with me I have only a vague outline of the story in my head, but it would be extremely helpful to know whether what I have written so far makes any sort of sense.
If anyone would care to take a look at it, I should be happy to offer a crit in exchange on a full or part story. Any brave volunteers please PM me.
An esoteric subject - first 2000
An esoteric subject - first 2000
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Blog The View From Sliabh Mannan.
Blog The View From Sliabh Mannan.
Re: An esoteric subject - first 2000
Hi Ishmael –
I tried to send this to you via PM, but it didn't appear to send. just got stuck in my outbox. anyway....
Sure, I’d be happy to take a look for you. Please feel free to email me directly to Christopher.henckel@gmail.com
In exchange, would you mind having a look over the first chapter of my current story? It is 2400.
Kind Regards
Christopher Henckel
I tried to send this to you via PM, but it didn't appear to send. just got stuck in my outbox. anyway....
Sure, I’d be happy to take a look for you. Please feel free to email me directly to Christopher.henckel@gmail.com
In exchange, would you mind having a look over the first chapter of my current story? It is 2400.
Kind Regards
Christopher Henckel
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