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Ishmael
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Baen's Bar Stories

Postby Ishmael » Sun Sep 04, 2016 8:30 am

For friends here who are members of Baen's Bar:

I posted a story a few weeks ago that I really couldn't sort out. After some VERY helpful criticism it's now reached version 4. Only 1800 words, so if any members can spare the time to pop over there I'd be delighted to hear from you.

http://bar.baen.com/

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