V34 Q1 critiques?

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disgruntledpeony
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V34 Q1 critiques?

Postby disgruntledpeony » Fri Dec 02, 2016 4:14 pm

Okay, I've finally wrestled my story into a place where I want (and definitely need) critiques in order to determine how to improve upon it. If anyone's willing to bite, I'm willing to do critique exchanges. My story is approximately 5800 words long. I'd appreciate any and all feedback people are willing to provide. wotf007

EDIT: I've now fixed the title of this thread; I initially listed volume 33 instead of volume 34 by mistake. wotf004
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Re: V33 Q1 critiques?

Postby amoskalik » Sat Dec 03, 2016 8:29 am

I'm willing to take a look. I don't have anything ready to be critiqued at this time but I'll take a rain check for Q2 if that's alright. I'll send you a PM with my email.
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Re: V33 Q1 critiques?

Postby disgruntledpeony » Sat Dec 03, 2016 9:02 am

amoskalik wrote:I'm willing to take a look. I don't have anything ready to be critiqued at this time but I'll take a rain check for Q2 if that's alright. I'll send you a PM with my email.


Sounds good! I'll send it your way this afternoon. :)
If a person offend you, and you are in doubt as to whether it was intentional or not, do not resort to extreme measures; simply watch your chance and hit him with a brick. ~ Mark Twain
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2017: SHM, n/a, F, ?

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Re: V34 Q1 critiques?

Postby J'nae Rae » Sun Dec 04, 2016 9:22 am

I've already submitted for this quarter, but am willing to take a look. I'll also take a rain-check for a future critique
HM Q1 2015, Q3 & Q4 2016.
R Q1 & Q2 2017
The Trade's On, in Issue 8 of Sci Phi Journal, November 2015
Naidin's Song: Blood Bound, published August 2016
Nine-Tenths, on Empyreome (Weekly Flash Fiction,) June 2017

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Re: V34 Q1 critiques?

Postby disgruntledpeony » Sun Dec 04, 2016 10:48 am

J'nae Rae wrote:I've already submitted for this quarter, but am willing to take a look. I'll also take a rain-check for a future critique


Thank you! wotf007 Sounds like a plan. I'll PM you my e-mail address.
If a person offend you, and you are in doubt as to whether it was intentional or not, do not resort to extreme measures; simply watch your chance and hit him with a brick. ~ Mark Twain
2015, Q4: R
2016: SF, n/a, SHM, SHM
2017: SHM, n/a, F, ?


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