First 1,000 words exchange?

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First 1,000 words exchange?

Postby LDWriter2 » Thu Jan 19, 2017 9:45 pm

I don't normally do this but the opening of the story I am doing is still giving me fits.

I think I have it pretty much okay but a couple of crits would help to know if I do.


I think I may have the rest of the story down. Or at least as much as I can. But it isn't giving me fits.


So anyone want to exchange first one thousands words?

It's two genre mashed together. Something different for me and not so original but I think I gave it a good twist or two. We shall see.
Working on turning Lead into Gold.

Four HMs From WotF
The latest was Q1'12
HM-quarter 4 Volume 32
One HM for another contest
published in Strange New Worlds Ten.
Another HM http://onthepremises.com/minis/mini_18.html

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