Diabolical Plots Submission Critique Request

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amyhg
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Diabolical Plots Submission Critique Request

Postby amyhg » Wed Jul 19, 2017 6:20 pm

Hey, Folks!

I'm hoping to submit to Diabolical Plots while it's open this month. Anyone willing to critique my first-ish draft? Submissions can't be over 3500 words so it's a short piece. It started as a longer piece and I've been cutting it down. I've squeezed out over 3000 words so far. As a result, I'm starting to worry that the content is getting dry with all the wringing. I need some eyes on it to get ideas on how to spruce it up and if there are still places I can cut down. Any takers? PM me!

Thanks,
Amy
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