Critiques by Ishmael

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Ishmael
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Critiques by Ishmael

Postby Ishmael » Sat Feb 10, 2018 9:32 am

May I remind forum members that I'm still happy to offer critiques and sometimes exchanges despite being pro'ed out of the contest. Obviously if I knew how to win I'd have won, but I managed a semi-finalist and a couple of silvers. I don't however tell people their stories are good if I don't think they are and I do point out faults if I find them. PM me or (if we've exchanged before and you have my address) email me.

NB don't expect me to know what quarter of what volume it is!
1 x SF, 2 x SHM, 11 x HM, WotF batting average .583
Blog The View From Sliabh Mannan.

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Re: Critiques by Ishmael

Postby LDWriter2 » Sun Feb 11, 2018 12:18 pm

I could use another check over on mine between 6,000 and 6,600 words. And it is sort of, kind of, well its just plain speculative.
Working on turning Lead into Gold.

Four HMs From WotF
The latest was Q1'12
HM-quarter 4 Volume 32
One HM for another contest
published in Strange New Worlds Ten.
Another HM http://onthepremises.com/minis/mini_18.html

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Re: Critiques by Ishmael

Postby Ishmael » Mon Feb 12, 2018 3:56 am

Always happy to help, Louis. Punt it over.
1 x SF, 2 x SHM, 11 x HM, WotF batting average .583
Blog The View From Sliabh Mannan.

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Re: Critiques by Ishmael

Postby michaeljwyantjr » Wed Feb 21, 2018 8:04 am

Just wanted to throw out a public "thank you" for the critique, Ishmael! wotf009
WotF Results:
  • R:1
  • HM:4
  • sHM:0
  • SF:0
  • F:0
  • (Last: Pending, Q1.v35)


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