In Need of a Story Critique for Q2

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LorenzoAL9857
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In Need of a Story Critique for Q2

Postby LorenzoAL9857 » Tue Jun 19, 2018 11:04 am

So I have a story here that needs a little editing and I'd be grateful to wants to help. In return, I'll assist you with your own story.

My story is just under the 17,000 word limit so novelette size. Hopefully, that won't be a problem.

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Re: In Need of a Story Critique for Q2

Postby Elto_Danzig » Tue Jun 19, 2018 5:16 pm

Is it fantasy or sci fi?
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Re: In Need of a Story Critique for Q2

Postby RSchibler » Tue Jun 19, 2018 5:31 pm

I can’t do 17,000 words right now but I’m happy to do a first 450 crit for you.
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Re: In Need of a Story Critique for Q2

Postby YM Pang » Tue Jun 19, 2018 9:27 pm

I can do a general critique, though not a detailed one for 17K. Will PM you.
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