Feedback on a 900 word prologue

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Henckel
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Feedback on a 900 word prologue

Postby Henckel » Thu Sep 27, 2018 4:05 pm

Hi there. Does anyone have time to look over 900 words for me? It’s the prologue to a novel, so not for WOTF. In short, I’m looking to get your impressions. Is the prologue compelling enough for a person to keep reading? Is the pacing feel alright? Do the prose flow alright? So, nothing too intense.
If you’re interested, please PM or email me.

…and I’m happy to return the favor.

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Re: Feedback on a 900 word prologue

Postby Henckel » Sat Sep 29, 2018 1:50 am

Thanks for the PMs. I'll send now.

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Re: Feedback on a 900 word prologue

Postby Harion » Tue Oct 02, 2018 3:53 pm

Just send it over PM. I'll read it in a jiffy.
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