Hi there. Does anyone have time to look over 900 words for me? It’s the prologue to a novel, so not for WOTF. In short, I’m looking to get your impressions. Is the prologue compelling enough for a person to keep reading? Is the pacing feel alright? Do the prose flow alright? So, nothing too intense.
If you’re interested, please PM or email me.
…and I’m happy to return the favor.
Feedback on a 900 word prologue
Feedback on a 900 word prologue
(2014) V31 Q1 – R
(2018) V35 Q3 – HM
(2019) V36 Q3 – HM (published @ Sci-fi Lampoon)
(2019) V36 Q4 – SHM
(2020) V37 Q1 – ?
(2018) V35 Q3 – HM
(2019) V36 Q3 – HM (published @ Sci-fi Lampoon)
(2019) V36 Q4 – SHM
(2020) V37 Q1 – ?
Re: Feedback on a 900 word prologue
Thanks for the PMs. I'll send now.
(2014) V31 Q1 – R
(2018) V35 Q3 – HM
(2019) V36 Q3 – HM (published @ Sci-fi Lampoon)
(2019) V36 Q4 – SHM
(2020) V37 Q1 – ?
(2018) V35 Q3 – HM
(2019) V36 Q3 – HM (published @ Sci-fi Lampoon)
(2019) V36 Q4 – SHM
(2020) V37 Q1 – ?
Re: Feedback on a 900 word prologue
Just send it over PM. I'll read it in a jiffy.
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