High fantasy rewrite

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SCAFontaine
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High fantasy rewrite

Postby SCAFontaine » Mon Nov 19, 2018 11:56 pm

So I put in my first submission last quarter and got rejected. Reading over the first section, I doubt Dave even got past the first page so I have been doing a complete rewrite. The story is on the longer end nearing the max word limit, but I'm searching for a critique primarily on the first 1900 words. I really believe in this story and want to see it through to the best it can be.

Is anyone interested in helping me out?
I would be more than willing to do a swap if preferred, longer, shorter, doesn't matter.
5 x HM
2 x R

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RSchibler
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Re: High fantasy rewrite

Postby RSchibler » Tue Nov 20, 2018 6:35 am

Always
V34: R, HM, R
V35: HM, R, R, HM
V36: R, HM, HM, SHM
V37: HM, SF, SHM, P

ALWAYS available for critique. PM me.

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SCAFontaine
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Re: High fantasy rewrite

Postby SCAFontaine » Tue Nov 20, 2018 11:11 pm

I sent you an email. Thanks
5 x HM
2 x R


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