First 450 swap
First 450 swap
I'm looking for someone who hasn't read this piece to glance over the first 450 words and see how it grabs them.
V34: R, HM, R
V35: HM, R, R, HM
V36: R, HM, HM, SHM
V37: HM, P, P
ALWAYS available for critique. PM me.
Stories in A Dying Planet, Flame Tree Publishing and Hold Your Fire, WordFire Press
2020 Writers of the Future Superstars Scholarship
V35: HM, R, R, HM
V36: R, HM, HM, SHM
V37: HM, P, P
ALWAYS available for critique. PM me.
Stories in A Dying Planet, Flame Tree Publishing and Hold Your Fire, WordFire Press
2020 Writers of the Future Superstars Scholarship
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