First 450 swap

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Postby RSchibler » Mon Dec 24, 2018 10:03 am

I'm looking for someone who hasn't read this piece to glance over the first 450 words and see how it grabs them.

V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: P

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