First 450 swap
First 450 swap
I'm looking for someone who hasn't read this piece to glance over the first 450 words and see how it grabs them.
Trying to refute entropy with words.
Vol34: R, HM, R
Vol35: HM, R, R, HM
Vol36: R, HM, HM, pending
ALWAYS available for critiques. PM me.
https://www.flametreepublishing.com/A-Dying-Planet-Short-Stories-ISBN-9781787557819.html
Vol34: R, HM, R
Vol35: HM, R, R, HM
Vol36: R, HM, HM, pending
ALWAYS available for critiques. PM me.
https://www.flametreepublishing.com/A-Dying-Planet-Short-Stories-ISBN-9781787557819.html
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