First 450 swap

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First 450 swap

Postby RSchibler » Mon Dec 24, 2018 10:03 am

I'm looking for someone who hasn't read this piece to glance over the first 450 words and see how it grabs them.
V34: R, HM, R
V35: HM, R, R, HM
V36: R, HM, HM, SHM
V37: HM, P, P

ALWAYS available for critique. PM me.

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