First 450 swap

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First 450 swap

Postby RSchibler » Mon Dec 24, 2018 10:03 am

I'm looking for someone who hasn't read this piece to glance over the first 450 words and see how it grabs them.
Trying to refute entropy with words.

Vol34: R, HM, R
Vol35: HM, R, R, HM
Vol36: pending

ALWAYS available for critiques. PM me.

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