Anyone up for a 750 word read?

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Corbin Maxwell
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Anyone up for a 750 word read?

Postby Corbin Maxwell » Wed May 29, 2019 1:05 pm

Looking for someone to read my first 750, someone whom I haven't asked before.
For there is death in the sound of it, and a glamorous fatality, like silver pennons downrushing at sunset, or a dying fall of horns along the road to Ronceveaux.

The only easy day was yesterday.




SF x 1
SHM x 3
HM x 10

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czing
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Re: Anyone up for a 750 word read?

Postby czing » Wed May 29, 2019 1:25 pm

I'd be game
v36 Q1, Q3 - HM; Q4 - R
v37 Q1 - R; Q2 - SHM

Helge Mahrt
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Re: Anyone up for a 750 word read?

Postby Helge Mahrt » Thu May 30, 2019 1:05 am

Sure
R, HM, R
http://www.helgemahrt.com
Sky High, my YA/SciFi novel

TimE
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Re: Anyone up for a 750 word read?

Postby TimE » Thu May 30, 2019 7:05 am

I'm up for a 750 exchange.
Some HMs More Rs - I keep thinking I'm getting closer, but perhaps not.
CWA-Debut Dagger shortlist. https://thecwa.co.uk/colours/ (Still trying to find my genre - but perhaps it's scifi - and perhaps it's not)

Bill
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Re: Anyone up for a 750 word read?

Postby Bill » Tue Nov 05, 2019 5:30 am

Hello,
I'm new here. I've been writing on and off for a few years (15) more for fun than anything else. I have entered two stories for the WotF contests, not that I expect to win but I'm looking forward to the comments.
So, how do I go about 'critting' your tale?
I don't have a website only an email address.
william-stephen@gmx.de

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RSchibler
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Re: Anyone up for a 750 word read?

Postby RSchibler » Tue Nov 05, 2019 5:46 am

Hi Bill. What comments are you referring to? Which quarter did you enter?

There’s a stickied critique description at the top of this sub-topic. If you’re interested in swapping with someone, there’s usually someone around who is up for it.
V34: R, HM, R
V35: HM, R, R, HM
V36: R, HM, HM, SHM
V37: HM, SF, SHM, P

ALWAYS available for critique. PM me.

Stories in:
A Dying Planet, 2020
Hold Your Fire, 2021
Upon A Once Time, 2021
2020 Writers of the Future Superstars Scholarship

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RSchibler
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Re: Anyone up for a 750 word read?

Postby RSchibler » Tue Nov 05, 2019 6:41 am

Bill, I am always available for critiques. Feel free to message me about a critique on your story.
V34: R, HM, R
V35: HM, R, R, HM
V36: R, HM, HM, SHM
V37: HM, SF, SHM, P

ALWAYS available for critique. PM me.

Stories in:
A Dying Planet, 2020
Hold Your Fire, 2021
Upon A Once Time, 2021
2020 Writers of the Future Superstars Scholarship

Mr H
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Re: Anyone up for a 750 word read?

Postby Mr H » Tue Nov 05, 2019 1:45 pm

I'll take a look. No problem.
Lots of R
36 Q1 R
36 Q2 R
36 Q3 R
36 Q4 R
37 Q1 HM (happy dance may have occurred)
37 Q2 R
37 Q3 ?


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