Q-4 story that most probably could use some help

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LDWriter2
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Q-4 story that most probably could use some help

Postby LDWriter2 » Sun Aug 04, 2019 1:45 pm

Got mine done already for 36 Q 4. Actually it was a story I sent in earlier but I like it, think it mighty fit in and so I will try it again. But it does need critiquing Somewhere around 6,500-ish. I will critique one of yours or two half sizes.
Working on turning Lead into Gold.

Four HMs From WotF
The latest was Q1'12
HM-quarter 4 Volume 32
One HM for another contest
published in Strange New Worlds Ten.
Another HM http://onthepremises.com/minis/mini_18.html

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Re: Q-4 story that most probably could use some help

Postby RSchibler » Mon Aug 05, 2019 1:29 pm

If it's not the one I've already seen I'll give it a look.
Trying to refute entropy with words.

Vol34: R, HM, R
Vol35: HM, R, R, HM
Vol36: R, HM, pending

ALWAYS available for critiques. PM me.

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Re: Q-4 story that most probably could use some help

Postby LDWriter2 » Wed Aug 07, 2019 7:18 pm

I decided to try another story since this one seems to be one I sent in twice. And I have a third story in mind if this second one turns out to be totally rejected twice.
Working on turning Lead into Gold.

Four HMs From WotF
The latest was Q1'12
HM-quarter 4 Volume 32
One HM for another contest
published in Strange New Worlds Ten.
Another HM http://onthepremises.com/minis/mini_18.html

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Re: Q-4 story that most probably could use some help

Postby RSchibler » Thu Aug 08, 2019 6:20 am

Always
Trying to refute entropy with words.

Vol34: R, HM, R
Vol35: HM, R, R, HM
Vol36: R, HM, pending

ALWAYS available for critiques. PM me.

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Re: Q-4 story that most probably could use some help

Postby manchowder1 » Mon Aug 12, 2019 1:39 pm

just sent you a pm.


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