Long story in need of criticism.

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Mr H
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Long story in need of criticism.

Postby Mr H » Thu Oct 24, 2019 8:17 pm

I have a 16,000 ish story. Been knocked back once. I need some aggressive criticism, opinions, as well as any grammar ninja action, so on, to be unleashed upon its wretched form.

Happy to read in return, if required. I will be harsh.

PM me.
Lots of R
36 Q1 R
36 Q2 R
36 Q3 R
36 Q4 R
37 Q1 HM (happy dance may have occurred)
37 Q2 R
37 Q3 R
37 Q4 R
38 Q1 ? (Hmm... Let me guess.)
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Re: Long story in need of criticism.

Postby RSchibler » Fri Oct 25, 2019 8:21 am

Always. Might take me a week or so at that length.
V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: P

ALWAYS available for critique.

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Mr H
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Re: Long story in need of criticism.

Postby Mr H » Fri Oct 25, 2019 2:03 pm

Thankyou.
Lots of R
36 Q1 R
36 Q2 R
36 Q3 R
36 Q4 R
37 Q1 HM (happy dance may have occurred)
37 Q2 R
37 Q3 R
37 Q4 R
38 Q1 ? (Hmm... Let me guess.)
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