Long story in need of criticism.

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Mr H
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Long story in need of criticism.

Postby Mr H » Thu Oct 24, 2019 8:17 pm

I have a 16,000 ish story. Been knocked back once. I need some aggressive criticism, opinions, as well as any grammar ninja action, so on, to be unleashed upon its wretched form.

Happy to read in return, if required. I will be harsh.

PM me.

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RSchibler
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Re: Long story in need of criticism.

Postby RSchibler » Fri Oct 25, 2019 8:21 am

Always. Might take me a week or so at that length.
Trying to refute entropy with words.

Vol34: R, HM, R
Vol35: HM, R, R, HM
Vol36: R, HM, HM, pending

ALWAYS available for critiques. PM me.


https://www.flametreepublishing.com/A-Dying-Planet-Short-Stories-ISBN-9781787557819.html

Mr H
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Re: Long story in need of criticism.

Postby Mr H » Fri Oct 25, 2019 2:03 pm

Thankyou.


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