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Ulysses5284
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Looking for more help

Postby Ulysses5284 » Tue Feb 04, 2020 3:29 pm

Hello again,

I'm not sure if this should be added to my previous call for a critique, but it's been a couple or weeks since I made my last request. I apologize in advance if I'm in the wrong and should've continued with the last one. In any event, I'm looking for another critique. As my work barely crosses the 16k word threshold--gah, I know--I don't expect someone to to go through all of it.

I've had some wonderful help so far and I think I'm closing in on where my work needs to be. But I also know that Im not there yet. I'm doing better with my POV issues, voice, etc. I'm more than willing to do a read-for-read if that is desired as well.

I'd also like to wish everyone good luck on this next quarter. And also hope you and yours remain safe and happy in these trying times. Take care!

TimE
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Re: Looking for more help

Postby TimE » Wed Feb 05, 2020 4:29 am

Ulysses5284 wrote:Hello again,

I'm looking for another critique.


I'll try and help. I'll send you my email address.
Some HMs More Rs - I keep thinking I'm getting closer, but perhaps not.
CWA-Debut Dagger shortlist. https://thecwa.co.uk/colours/ (Still trying to find my genre - but perhaps it's scifi - and perhaps it's not)

Yvgoodwin
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Re: Looking for more help

Postby Yvgoodwin » Wed Feb 19, 2020 9:34 pm

I am willing to do a read-for-read if you want!

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Re: Looking for more help

Postby RSchibler » Thu Feb 20, 2020 5:50 am

Always. Unless I’ve already seen it and you’re looking for fresh eyes.
V34: R, HM, R
V35: HM, R, R, HM
V36: R, HM, HM, SHM
V37: HM, P, P

ALWAYS available for critique. PM me.

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