Anyone like to swap critiques? My story is 17K

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Anyone like to swap critiques? My story is 17K

Postby fihr » Wed Apr 15, 2020 6:04 pm

Welp, I haven't been on here for maybe three years as I've been writing other things. If anyone's up for reading my 17K fantasy, then I'd love to swap a crit with you. Please PM me if you're interested.

Edit: If you don't have a short story to swap, I'm happy to look at the first three chapters of your novel (so long as they're under 25K ). Or, I can beta 2 short stories for you, to make the swap fair if yours are half my length.
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Re: Anyone like to swap critiques? My story is 17K

Postby Dustin Adams » Thu Apr 16, 2020 5:58 am

Fi!
So great to see you.

I'm not so reliable with longer stories, but I'm sure it's fantastic.

Someone - take her up on this offer, quick!
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Re: Anyone like to swap critiques? My story is 17K

Postby RSchibler » Thu Apr 16, 2020 7:02 am

Sure. I’m always down for a crit.
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Re: Anyone like to swap critiques? My story is 17K

Postby fihr » Thu Apr 16, 2020 5:43 pm

Hi Dustin! You remembered me! I'm so pleased. Your greeting gave me a huge smile. Thanks for your words of confidence. I hope I can live up to them. :D And, I hope your writing is going wonderfully.
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Re: Anyone like to swap critiques? My story is 17K

Postby fihr » Thu Apr 16, 2020 5:43 pm

Thanks RSchibler, I'll PM you.
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Re: Anyone like to swap critiques? My story is 17K

Postby RSchibler » Thu Apr 16, 2020 6:09 pm

fihr wrote:Thanks RSchibler, I'll PM you.


Look forward to it!
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V35: HM, R, R, HM
V36: R, HM, HM, SHM
V37: HM, P, P

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