Greetings Forumittes:
I recently finished editing my first draft for my third quarter entry. Anyone wanna swap critiques?
Not exactly sure how to do this but let’s meet by the watering hole in the middle of the night!! Secret handshake must include two slaps, one rock pound, and at least one spirit fingers wiggle or else I flee back into hiding.
Shockhawk
First timer needing Critique for WOTF piece
First timer needing Critique for WOTF piece
Vol 37 - X, R, R, R
Vol 38 - ?, WIP
Vol 38 - ?, WIP
Re: First timer needing Critique for WOTF piece
You would probably rather someone with a HM to their name, but I'm always open. If you're interested, just drop me a PM.
Success is going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. ~ Winston Churchill
V. 37: R, R, R, HM
V. 38: ?,
V. 37: R, R, R, HM
V. 38: ?,
Re: First timer needing Critique for WOTF piece
Sure, I'll take a look. PM me!
V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: P
ALWAYS available for critique.
www.rebeccaetreasure.com
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: P
ALWAYS available for critique.
www.rebeccaetreasure.com
Re: First timer needing Critique for WOTF piece
I am also willing to take a look as well, send me a PM.
-
- Posts: 137
- Joined: Wed Sep 05, 2018 12:25 am
- Location: Spain
Re: First timer needing Critique for WOTF piece
If you're looking for more crits, I'm willing. PM me.
5 x HM
2 x R
2 x R
Re: First timer needing Critique for WOTF piece
To All:
Thank you so so much for all the offers of support. I ended up sending it to Rueben and he responded with a full critique before I even woke up the next day... then life happened (we sold our house and found a new house to buy and are moving on the 30th of this month (yeah for timing)- assuming escrow goes through)...Hence my disappearing act. Anyways I love that you all are willing to help but I'm pretty sure since I'm moving I wont have much more time to devote to this quarters entry. I edited a bunch of stuff that Rueben showed me (loved the critique by the way - learned a lot - like don't use "as" very much, when you do use it make the action part go first because it flows better and don't use so many adjectives to start sentences)... super helpful stuff for a newbie.
Anyways I'm rambling. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Rein-checks for next quarter?
Shockhawk
Thank you so so much for all the offers of support. I ended up sending it to Rueben and he responded with a full critique before I even woke up the next day... then life happened (we sold our house and found a new house to buy and are moving on the 30th of this month (yeah for timing)- assuming escrow goes through)...Hence my disappearing act. Anyways I love that you all are willing to help but I'm pretty sure since I'm moving I wont have much more time to devote to this quarters entry. I edited a bunch of stuff that Rueben showed me (loved the critique by the way - learned a lot - like don't use "as" very much, when you do use it make the action part go first because it flows better and don't use so many adjectives to start sentences)... super helpful stuff for a newbie.
Anyways I'm rambling. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Rein-checks for next quarter?
Shockhawk
Vol 37 - X, R, R, R
Vol 38 - ?, WIP
Vol 38 - ?, WIP
Return to “Story Critique Exchange”
Who is online
Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 2 guests