Need a critique for my WOTF story

[Temidayo]

I am new on this platform. So I am looking for someone to take a look at my story. It is about 6000 words long.


Here is my email : brainiedude@gmail.com

I will really appreciate helping hands. Thanks.

[nreavis]

I'll take a look at it, send me a PM. :)

[SCAFontaine]

I will too. Send me a PM.

[empressed]

I could use a crit and will reciprocate. It's a 12K word historical fantasy.

[Reuben]

Sure, my PM's aren't working right now, though. Maybe send me an email.

[Temidayo]

Hi Guys, I have send you all a PM. And Reuben, I have also sent you an email. I await your responses. I thought you guys would contact me via my email. So I didn't bother checking back. That's why my response came late. I am sorry about that. But anyway, I await your responses.

[DavidK]

Empressed, I may have jumped in too late, so go with whats on offer, but happy to take a look.

David K

[empressed]

Thanks, David. I'm always grateful for a critique! If you still have time by the end of this coming week, I will have made changes and need fresh eyes. Either way, I'll be happy to read yours, so send it to victoria_dixon@msn.com.

[DavidK]

Thanks, David. I'm always grateful for a critique! If you still have time by the end of this coming week, I will have made changes and need fresh eyes. Either way, I'll be happy to read yours, so send it to victoria_dixon@msn.com.

Happy to - david@davidkernot.com