Hi,
I could use some fresh eyes and critiques on my WOTF story. I got a rejection and I would like to figure out how to improve it. If I can rework my story into something better, I will submit it to a future quarter. I need to figure out where I am going wrong in my writing.
Thanks,
Apollo.
In need of a critique
Re: In need of a critique
Anytime. Send me a PM
V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: P
ALWAYS available for critique.
www.rebeccaetreasure.com
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: P
ALWAYS available for critique.
www.rebeccaetreasure.com
Re: In need of a critique
I'm sure RSchibler is able to provide better feedback than I can, but if you would like a second perspective then I'd be happy to do my best. Just send me a PM. :)
V37 Q3: R
V37 Q4: SHM
V38 Q1: ?
V37 Q4: SHM
V38 Q1: ?
Re: In need of a critique
I am also willing to take a look. Send me a PM :)
Re: In need of a critique
Thanks for all the responses! I really appreciate the critiques. I sent you all PM's. Since my brain is shutting down, I'll follow up tomorrow and send my story.
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Re: In need of a critique
I'll look at the first two pages and give my thoughts. Chances are that's where the R took place. Unless you wrote 80 pages, then it took place on page 10.
PM me.

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Re: In need of a critique
Hey, Apollo! I would also love to help!
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Re: In need of a critique
I'll take a look too. :) Won't be able to get back to you until end of next week though.
5 x HM
2 x R
2 x R
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