In need of a critique

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Apollo
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In need of a critique

Postby Apollo » Tue Jul 14, 2020 7:45 pm

Hi,

I could use some fresh eyes and critiques on my WOTF story. I got a rejection and I would like to figure out how to improve it. If I can rework my story into something better, I will submit it to a future quarter. I need to figure out where I am going wrong in my writing.

Thanks,
Apollo.

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RSchibler
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Re: In need of a critique

Postby RSchibler » Tue Jul 14, 2020 7:48 pm

Anytime. Send me a PM
V34: R, HM, R
V35: HM, R, R, HM
V36: R, HM, HM, SHM
V37: HM, SF, SHM, P

ALWAYS available for critique. PM me.

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PenMark
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Re: In need of a critique

Postby PenMark » Tue Jul 14, 2020 8:00 pm

I'm sure RSchibler is able to provide better feedback than I can, but if you would like a second perspective then I'd be happy to do my best. Just send me a PM. :)
V37 Q3: R
V37 Q4: Submitted

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nreavis
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Re: In need of a critique

Postby nreavis » Tue Jul 14, 2020 8:02 pm

I am also willing to take a look. Send me a PM :)
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Apollo
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Re: In need of a critique

Postby Apollo » Tue Jul 14, 2020 8:23 pm

Thanks for all the responses! I really appreciate the critiques. I sent you all PM's. Since my brain is shutting down, I'll follow up tomorrow and send my story.

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Dustin Adams
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Re: In need of a critique

Postby Dustin Adams » Wed Jul 15, 2020 3:30 am

I'll look at the first two pages and give my thoughts. Chances are that's where the R took place. Unless you wrote 80 pages, then it took place on page 10. wotf019

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Ania
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Re: In need of a critique

Postby Ania » Wed Jul 15, 2020 7:08 am

Hey, Apollo! I would also love to help!

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Re: In need of a critique

Postby SCAFontaine » Wed Jul 15, 2020 10:43 am

I'll take a look too. :) Won't be able to get back to you until end of next week though.
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BlackInk
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Re: In need of a critique

Postby BlackInk » Thu Jul 16, 2020 4:27 pm

I'd be happy to offer my eyes as well.
Q4 V.36: HM
Q3 V.37: R
Q4 V.37: TBD


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