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Ania
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Looking for feedback!

Postby Ania » Tue Jul 14, 2020 9:38 pm

Hello, everyone!

This is my first post and my first cry for help (my husband has reached his limit)! It's my first long story and I'm worried that it's unbalanced and maybe needs more action. Or any other thing that I can't even think of or name! I could really use some critique!

Thank you in advance, and I would love to reciprocate, if anyone will trust a newcomer :)
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TimE
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Re: Looking for feedback!

Postby TimE » Wed Jul 15, 2020 4:37 am

I'll take a look Ania, PM me.
Some HMs More Rs - I keep thinking I'm getting closer, but perhaps not.
CWA-Debut Dagger shortlist. https://thecwa.co.uk/colours/ (Still trying to find my genre - but perhaps it's scifi - and perhaps it's not)
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nreavis
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Re: Looking for feedback!

Postby nreavis » Wed Jul 15, 2020 6:57 am

I'll take a look at it as well, PM me :)
HM: 3
R: 1
Author Page: http://www.reynichols.com
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Ania
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Re: Looking for feedback!

Postby Ania » Wed Jul 15, 2020 7:06 am

Thank you!! I'm sorry for not mentioning it earlier, but please be prepared, the story is 10000 words long...
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Re: Looking for feedback!

Postby TimE » Wed Jul 15, 2020 7:11 am

Ania wrote:Thank you!! I'm sorry for not mentioning it earlier, but please be prepared, the story is 10,000 words long...


Not a problem
Some HMs More Rs - I keep thinking I'm getting closer, but perhaps not.
CWA-Debut Dagger shortlist. https://thecwa.co.uk/colours/ (Still trying to find my genre - but perhaps it's scifi - and perhaps it's not)
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Apollo
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Re: Looking for feedback!

Postby Apollo » Wed Jul 15, 2020 10:28 am

Hey, Ania, I would be happy to read your story. The others have far more experience with the competition, but I will do what I can.
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Re: Looking for feedback!

Postby BlackInk » Thu Jul 16, 2020 4:28 pm

I'd be happy to critique your story. Me husband can relate to yours!
Q4 V.36: HM
Q3 V.37: R
Q4 V.37: SHM
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