Looking for a critique/feedback

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nreavis
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Looking for a critique/feedback

Postby nreavis » Tue Aug 04, 2020 6:19 pm

Hi everyone!

My short story that I'm considering for Q4 finally finished making its rounds in my writer's group, and I would like another pair of eyes on it, if anyone would be so willing.

Any kind of feedback would be welcome. I wrote it based of a random prompt challenge and I'm really proud of what I've done with it so far.

4200 words.
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Re: Looking for a critique/feedback

Postby TimE » Tue Aug 04, 2020 11:33 pm

nreavis wrote:Hi everyone!

My short story that I'm considering for Q4 finally finished making its rounds in my writer's group, and I would like another pair of eyes on it, if anyone would be so willing.

Any kind of feedback would be welcome. I wrote it based of a random prompt challenge and I'm really proud of what I've done with it so far.

4200 words.


You keep offering to crit the same people as I do, so I feel I have to offer! I wouldn't expect to add a lot if it's been thru a crit group, but i'll do what i can.
Drop me a PM.
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Re: Looking for a critique/feedback

Postby Dustin Adams » Wed Aug 05, 2020 5:42 am

I believe I owe you an exchange, yes?
Send it my way if you'd like.
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Re: Looking for a critique/feedback

Postby SCAFontaine » Wed Aug 05, 2020 9:46 am

I'm willing in two weeks if that time frame works for you.
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Re: Looking for a critique/feedback

Postby nreavis » Wed Aug 05, 2020 5:15 pm

SCAFontaine wrote:I'm willing in two weeks if that time frame works for you.


Sure, just drop me a PM when you have time. :)
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Re: Looking for a critique/feedback

Postby BlackInk » Mon Sep 21, 2020 12:49 pm

Nreavis,

I'd be happy to give it a look if you're still interested. I'll pm you my email.
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