Looking for a critique/feedback

[nreavis]

Hi everyone!

My short story that I'm considering for Q4 finally finished making its rounds in my writer's group, and I would like another pair of eyes on it, if anyone would be so willing.

Any kind of feedback would be welcome. I wrote it based of a random prompt challenge and I'm really proud of what I've done with it so far.

4200 words.

[TimE]

Hi everyone!

My short story that I'm considering for Q4 finally finished making its rounds in my writer's group, and I would like another pair of eyes on it, if anyone would be so willing.

Any kind of feedback would be welcome. I wrote it based of a random prompt challenge and I'm really proud of what I've done with it so far.

4200 words.

You keep offering to crit the same people as I do, so I feel I have to offer! I wouldn't expect to add a lot if it's been thru a crit group, but i'll do what i can.
Drop me a PM.

[Dustin Adams]

I believe I owe you an exchange, yes?
Send it my way if you'd like.

[SCAFontaine]

I'm willing in two weeks if that time frame works for you.

[nreavis]

I'm willing in two weeks if that time frame works for you.

Sure, just drop me a PM when you have time. :)

[BlackInk]

Nreavis,

I'd be happy to give it a look if you're still interested. I'll pm you my email.