Hi everyone!
My short story that I'm considering for Q4 finally finished making its rounds in my writer's group, and I would like another pair of eyes on it, if anyone would be so willing.
Any kind of feedback would be welcome. I wrote it based of a random prompt challenge and I'm really proud of what I've done with it so far.
4200 words.
Looking for a critique/feedback
Re: Looking for a critique/feedback
nreavis wrote:Hi everyone!
My short story that I'm considering for Q4 finally finished making its rounds in my writer's group, and I would like another pair of eyes on it, if anyone would be so willing.
Any kind of feedback would be welcome. I wrote it based of a random prompt challenge and I'm really proud of what I've done with it so far.
4200 words.
You keep offering to crit the same people as I do, so I feel I have to offer! I wouldn't expect to add a lot if it's been thru a crit group, but i'll do what i can.
Drop me a PM.
Some HMs More Rs - I keep thinking I'm getting closer, but perhaps not.
CWA-Debut Dagger shortlist. https://thecwa.co.uk/colours/ (Still trying to find my genre - but perhaps it's scifi - and perhaps it's not)
CWA-Debut Dagger shortlist. https://thecwa.co.uk/colours/ (Still trying to find my genre - but perhaps it's scifi - and perhaps it's not)
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Re: Looking for a critique/feedback
I believe I owe you an exchange, yes?
Send it my way if you'd like.
Send it my way if you'd like.
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Re: Looking for a critique/feedback
I'm willing in two weeks if that time frame works for you.
5 x HM
2 x R
2 x R
Re: Looking for a critique/feedback
SCAFontaine wrote:I'm willing in two weeks if that time frame works for you.
Sure, just drop me a PM when you have time. :)
Re: Looking for a critique/feedback
Nreavis,
I'd be happy to give it a look if you're still interested. I'll pm you my email.
I'd be happy to give it a look if you're still interested. I'll pm you my email.
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