Critiquing my story as a first time submission

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MichaelH
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Critiquing my story as a first time submission

Postby MichaelH » Wed Oct 21, 2020 2:31 pm

Hello everyone
This is my first time posting here. I’m trying to submit my first story to the contest and would like a critique. It’s my first short story and only on its second draft. I’m ignorant as to how things work around here so help would be appreciated.

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RSchibler
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Re: Critiquing my story as a first time submission

Postby RSchibler » Wed Oct 21, 2020 3:21 pm

You can pm me a google docs link to your story when you’re ready and I’ll critique it.
V34: R, HM, R
V35: HM, R, R, HM
V36: R, HM, HM, SHM
V37: HM, SF, SHM, SHM
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ALWAYS available for critique. PM me.

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Re: Critiquing my story as a first time submission

Postby vibrantbear » Mon Oct 26, 2020 7:42 am

Michael,
I'm new too and RSchibler recently gave me a critique that was incredibly thorough and helpful. So If you have not already, I would start there. If after that you want another set of eyes on the story, let me know.


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