Li'l help? SS critique

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foxanthony
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Li'l help? SS critique

Postby foxanthony » Thu Aug 18, 2011 5:57 pm

I've a short that I believe will be in the money in Q4. But, I want it all! I'm hunting the GRAND PRIZE!! You can tell me I'm wrong, but what I'm looking for is how I can be right. What can I do to this story to make it better? I will also trade critiques, happily.

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