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Re: Five Minute Rant

Postby RSchibler » Mon Apr 30, 2018 11:57 am

During the move over the last three weeks I got 4 rejections from various places and then the HM. The honorable mention is the only thing keeping me going at this point, honestly. Some days I feel like I can do this if I just keep working, and some days... well, you know. My computer (and all the other furniture etc) arrives tomorrow. I’m going to get organized and then buckle down and resubmit those pieces. Thanks to Dave Farland (and my buddies here) for encouraging me to keep going!
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Re: Five Minute Rant

Postby YM Pang » Mon Apr 30, 2018 12:18 pm

RSchibler wrote:During the move over the last three weeks I got 4 rejections from various places and then the HM. The honorable mention is the only thing keeping me going at this point, honestly. Some days I feel like I can do this if I just keep working, and some days... well, you know. My computer (and all the other furniture etc) arrives tomorrow. I’m going to get organized and then buckle down and resubmit those pieces. Thanks to Dave Farland (and my buddies here) for encouraging me to keep going!

I know the feeling. Back in 2009, when KD gave me an HM for my first ever submission... It felt like validation, like I was actually a writer and not some silly teenager scribbling weird things.

Of course, I'm a little more demanding of myself (and my contest results) these days, but even so getting an HM for Q1 felt much better than just getting an R. (Among the other seven rejections, one was a really nice "Not for me but good luck with this story" personal rejection. The rest, unfortunately, were forms).

michaeljwyantjr wrote:Yep. I'm one of the Rs there... that one came in today.

R from Fireside too, right here.
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Re: Five Minute Rant

Postby disgruntledpeony » Mon Apr 30, 2018 6:22 pm

michaeljwyantjr wrote:
MattDovey wrote:*case in point: Fireside opened for five days last week. Checking the Subs Grinder, which anecdotally captures about 10-20% of all subs made, they got at least 900 stories in those five days. WHAT.


Yep. I'm one of the Rs there... that one came in today.

Why do they always come in bunches? wotf027


In my case, at least, It's probably because I send them in bunches. wotf019 I used to jump on the computer as soon as I got a rejection and send it somewhere else, but I don't always have time for that these days, so I'll usually end up collecting and then sending out again about three at a time. (Honestly, some of my stories are probably ready for retirement, but I am stubborn and keep trying to find markets for them.)
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Re: Five Minute Rant

Postby LDWriter2 » Tue May 01, 2018 6:46 pm

[quote="YM Pang"]

It worked at one time. And it is only the web site the company that owns those four magazines uses, that is the problem.
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Re: Five Minute Rant

Postby vjalrik » Tue May 01, 2018 7:19 pm

disgruntledpeony wrote:In my case, at least, It's probably because I send them in bunches. wotf019 I used to jump on the computer as soon as I got a rejection and send it somewhere else, but I don't always have time for that these days, so I'll usually end up collecting and then sending out again about three at a time. (Honestly, some of my stories are probably ready for retirement, but I am stubborn and keep trying to find markets for them.)

This is me exactly! All at once or not at all. I've definitely got some stories that are probably better off in the "not at all" pile, but then I get them back out after a while and think, these aren't so bad....
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Re: Five Minute Rant

Postby YM Pang » Wed May 02, 2018 4:24 pm

Should not have grumbled about 8 rejections in 5 days. Writing gods aren't happy. It's now become 12 rejections in 7 days.
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Re: Five Minute Rant

Postby amoskalik » Thu May 03, 2018 5:11 am

YM Pang wrote:Should not have grumbled about 8 rejections in 5 days. Writing gods aren't happy. It's now become 12 rejections in 7 days.


Yikes! I have 6 Rs in 6 days going right now...
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Postby LDWriter2 » Fri May 04, 2018 7:00 pm

amoskalik wrote:
YM Pang wrote:Should not have grumbled about 8 rejections in 5 days. Writing gods aren't happy. It's now become 12 rejections in 7 days.


Yikes! I have 6 Rs in 6 days going right now...



Used to be my numbers but I have gotten so much out of the habit of sending in stories. I am doing good to get one rejection every three months, of course the other day it was two. Now soon it will be two again-maybe three. I still want to send a normal length one to Analog though. Speaking of that anyone know a good mystery mag that isn't Hitchcock or Ellery Queen's.
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Re: Five Minute Rant

Postby kentagions » Sun May 06, 2018 5:39 pm

Hot and Cold

Has anyone played that kid's game? Kid One hides an object somewhere in a room and Kid Two tries to find it. Kid One calls out, "You're getting hotter" as Kid Two approaches the object and, "You're getting colder" as Kid Two moves farther from it. The point is for Kid One to honestly instruct Kid Two to quickly find the object.

Dear editors,
Please play the Hot and Cold game with my work. You don't have time to give me a personal rejection, but you don't want to look at random crap from me while I guess what you might want; no matter how well educated my guesses might be. And it takes less time than placating vagueries. 'Cold' at the top of a rejection email is information while 'Not quite what we're looking for' makes my hemorrhoids itch. 'Warmer,' for God's sake, I'd kill for 'warmer.' 'Hot' would make my heart all a-twitter, and it would benefit you because you'd receive subsequent stories of higher quality.

I want everyone on board with this, all genres, all markets. Hot and Cold. Minimum effort for maximum return. Do it now. Please begin tomorrow, Monday morning, May 7, 2018.

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Re: Five Minute Rant

Postby RSchibler » Sun May 06, 2018 5:45 pm

Warmer!
Colder!
I’m on board with this.
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Re: Five Minute Rant

Postby amyhg » Sun May 06, 2018 6:13 pm

kentagions wrote:Hot and Cold


I second that suggestion. I got two rejections while I was at the WOTF workshop. Nothing like an ego-check amidst all the high-fives and glam. But the workshop definitely made it clear to me how personal the selection process is for editors. It's not about the sub-genre or mature content or writing style--that's all just to get into the editor's hands. The actual acceptance comes down to the editor's life. What topics is he or she interested in? Does your story resonate with his or her life experiences? Did you catch them in the right mood?

Realizing that was both frustrating and comforting. I hate that the process is SO subjective. However, it does give me hope for other markets.
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Re: Five Minute Rant

Postby amoskalik » Mon May 07, 2018 8:31 am

kentagions wrote:Hot and Cold

Has anyone played that kid's game? Kid One hides an object somewhere in a room and Kid Two tries to find it. Kid One calls out, "You're getting hotter" as Kid Two approaches the object and, "You're getting colder" as Kid Two moves farther from it. The point is for Kid One to honestly instruct Kid Two to quickly find the object.

Dear editors,
Please play the Hot and Cold game with my work. You don't have time to give me a personal rejection, but you don't want to look at random crap from me while I guess what you might want; no matter how well educated my guesses might be. And it takes less time than placating vagueries. 'Cold' at the top of a rejection email is information while 'Not quite what we're looking for' makes my hemorrhoids itch. 'Warmer,' for God's sake, I'd kill for 'warmer.' 'Hot' would make my heart all a-twitter, and it would benefit you because you'd receive subsequent stories of higher quality.

I want everyone on board with this, all genres, all markets. Hot and Cold. Minimum effort for maximum return. Do it now. Please begin tomorrow, Monday morning, May 7, 2018.

Best of luck discovering that next winner,
Kent


An intriguing idea. If they could actually pull it off, it would be very helpful, however, the Hot and Cold game works by relativism. "You're getting hotter."="Move more in that direction." "You're getting colder."="Reverse course." Which means they would have to remember your last story and then make a judgement as to whether this story is better or worse. Given the size of slush piles, that would be a logistical nightmare.
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Re: Five Minute Rant

Postby kentagions » Mon May 07, 2018 1:10 pm

amoskalik wrote:
An intriguing idea. If they could actually pull it off, it would be very helpful...


Thank you, glad you agree. <Pats self on back> Got something in my eye when I saw "however."

This wouldn't be the traditional game, but more like a blind guy at the target end of a shooting range telling a blind shooter how to... Okay, maybe not the best metaphor.

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Re: Five Minute Rant

Postby YM Pang » Tue May 08, 2018 1:02 pm

Now, taking the crazy idea seriously for a second...

I personally would like it 'cause some feedback feels more rewarding than none. But I don't know if it'll work on a grand scale. Even putting aside the logistical nightmares, it could lead to widespread self-rejection ("This editor said 'colder' to my alien bottle cap story; this must mean I should never send them another alien bottle cap story/never even write another alien bottle cap story." When, really, the editor just didn't like your second person narration, and the alien bottle cap was the one part they connected with. Plus, you could've sold the original story with a few more subs to weird fiction markets.)

It'll be nice to know if you're getting hotter/colder. But I think a (good) writing group could do the same job. Also, tiered form rejections are fairly close to this, with the benefit of being slightly less self-rejection inducing (imo).

What I'd appreciate: a quick notification when a story gets passed along to the chief editor/held for further consideration. That way I'd know the longer wait could be good news, rather than an indication of a story lost in cyberspace!
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Re: Five Minute Rant

Postby michaeljwyantjr » Tue May 08, 2018 1:11 pm

To jump on this bandwagon...

There's been some discussion about using "colder" or "warmer". I think the real nugget in this discussion is the idea of getting a single status at the bottom of a form rejection like:

Proximity: Warm/Hot/Cold

This puts the comparison strictly toward what the editor is looking for rather than turning it toward your work. That has potential, I imagine.
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Re: Five Minute Rant

Postby amoskalik » Wed May 09, 2018 8:39 am

I understand the emotional need for validation. When you get 50 nos for every yes, you begin to wonder, "are any of these at least a maybe?" But the bottom line is a "warm" is still a no, and if you were to get 50 warms in row, you'd start thinking, they just don't want me to feel bad, they don't really mean it, otherwise they'd actually buy one of these stories, right?

When you get to the submission phase of a story's life cycle, it is helpful to just think of it as a numbers game. You wrote it the best you could, so don't waste time on second guessing it. Just keep sending out until someone wants it or you feel you can do better by self publishing or you feel the story doesn't represent you well. Once you have a few dozen stories you've submitted a minimum of twenty times (or sold in less than that), then you can start analyzing which sold and to what sort of markets.
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Re: Five Minute Rant

Postby michaeljwyantjr » Wed May 09, 2018 8:50 am

There's definitely an emotional component to it, I'd be lying if I said there isn't, but I have to imagine a lot of submissions could be improved by providing guidance to writers of any sort.

Hell, half the submission guidelines I read are five or six years old and don't match the type of work they're currently publishing when you read said works.

Anyway... I'll stop adding to this since it's becoming a topic that probably deserves its own thread.
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Re: Five Minute Rant

Postby morganb » Wed May 09, 2018 10:19 am

I guess you know you're getting warmer when you start seeing more personal rejections...?

One of my flash stories this year made it to the final round of reviews at FFO. Suzanne Vincent sent me a personal email to tell me how close I was, which really sucked on one hand (to be THAT CLOSE and not quite make it), but was also really cool because she took the time to write me back. Then she offered to send me feedback from everyone involved in the vetting process so I could see what the staffers had to say about my story. At that level of review, they are looking for every reason to reject one story in favor of another, so most of the comments were of the "this is why I decided to pass on this story" variety.

It was a rejection, yes, but it was by far the best personal rejection I've ever received -- a full page of review notes and comments! I still haven't been able to land a story anywhere, but that was definitely a "warm...very warm..." day for me.

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Re: Five Minute Rant

Postby YM Pang » Thu May 10, 2018 11:35 am

Cold/Warm/Hot would be nice. But that's basically tiered form rejections, which a lot of places already have. I personally find it helpful to know if Story X was held for six months because it made it all the way to the chief editor, or if someone just opened the file, forgot to reject it, and realized it months later.
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Re: Five Minute Rant

Postby LDWriter2 » Wed May 23, 2018 7:16 pm

I would not mind something like that. Evidently there is a lukewarm wording and a Hot setting, but nothing in-between from most editors. BCS is different with that and I have sent in stories to a couple of e-zines that also sent out a person comment with every rejection.

Lukewarm would be someway of saying "send in another story" evidently editors who say that mean it and aren't just being nice or polite. Hot would be a personal comment, especially if it says you were close.
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Re: Five Minute Rant

Postby MattDovey » Thu May 24, 2018 1:28 am

LDWriter2 wrote:Lukewarm would be someway of saying "send in another story" evidently editors who say that mean it and aren't just being nice or polite. Hot would be a personal comment, especially if it says you were close.


FWIW this is what we do at PodCastle. There are 4 tiers of rejections, available to us slushers as templates:
* Tier 0, rarely deployed, is for those cases where the story was morally upsetting e.g. rape story, racist trash. It tells people to go read our guidelines again. I think I've sent one of these, ever.
* Tier 1 is a simple "no thank you". It's the bread and butter rejection.
* Tier 2 is "a lot we liked, but didn't come together, send us more". I usually use it for stories I did read to the end (less than half, tbh!) but just didn't click for whatever nebulous reason.
* Tier 3 is from the bosses only, when you got bumped and made it to the final round

Any of those might get personalised at the slusher's discretion; for my part, and this is entirely personal, I tend to write something when: it's very obvious to me (e.g. voice, too slow to open) because in all honesty I haven't got time when slushing to really dig into my feelings for why something isn't working; when I know (of) the writer, from forums/Twitter/reading previous stuff; or when the author has self-identified as marginalised in some way, because we explicitly want to encourage more diverse submissions. The latter two aren't a guarantee, though, and I've said before that sometimes the lack of a personal is a sign that there wasn't anything obviously wrong with it, and you're actually getting closer.

Other markets have similar. Analog has a "rather like your style, send more" that sometimes goes out (apparently; I've never seen it!). Charlie @ F&SF has a variety of tiers to his wording e.g. didn't grab me, didn't win me over (details on this blog post, section 6). You can sometimes find info on the Rejection Wiki.
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