First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

[s_c_baker]

I also have a Q4 first 450 ready to go, whenever anybody wants to swap.

[DavidK]

Seems that I now have a Q4 story complete and ready to submit.

If anyone has the time to review this 450, I would be thrilled and gladly look at theirs in return.

[katsincommand]

Seems that I now have a Q4 story complete and ready to submit.

If anyone has the time to review this 450, I would be thrilled and gladly look at theirs in return.

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also have a Q4 first 450 ready to go, whenever anybody wants to swap.

I haven't done a 450 crit yet, but I've done lots of crits. I'd be happy to look at yours. I'll PM you my email ady My story will be ready in a few days if you're up for a swap.

[hlf]

Consider me available for 450s.

[gower21]

I'm available for 450s as well. No exchange from my end. HIT ME! I feel generous all of a sudden :)

[s_c_baker]

I'm available for 450s as well. No exchange from my end. HIT ME! I feel generous all of a sudden :)

ITT: Tina fills up her inbox.

[Dustin Adams]

Well, I'm gonna send mine because I knew her before she was famous.

[gower21]

I'm available for 450s as well. No exchange from my end. HIT ME! I feel generous all of a sudden :)

ITT: Tina fills up her inbox.

I only got one or two requests before, so how bad can it be? Maybe I'll have to go pay some of the other board members to come over here and post so they can bury my offer.

Ehem! I will redact (did I use that word right?) the offer to critique when I get too full of requests. I will also offer it again when I free up my schedule.

And Yes Dustin send away!

[Strycher]

Well, I'm gonna send mine because I knew her before she was famous.

Are we hipsters, now?

Wish I had something to swap . . . Hey! Maybe I shouldn't be on the internet right now?

[Dustin Adams]

Maybe I shouldn't be on the internet right now?

WRITE WRITE WRITE

Tina,
Already sent. I'm like lightning.

[DavidK]

Dawn AND Tina? Jumps in quick. Thank you.

[josephk]

I am also interested in 450 crit swaps. Anyone interested just paste your 450 into a pm and send to me . . . i'll pm you back with mine.

I look forward to it!

[gower21]

Ok everyone! I just send back all the 450's I got requests for. I'm off this weekend on a business trip with my husband and family and when I come back I'll be neck deep in writing a novel, then in and out for the rest of the month. I'm closing off my offer right now for swapping, but I DO plan on coming back and taking more at a later date for Q4. I hope to see as many of you at the workshop as possible.

Thanks all!

[dantzel]

Okay, I think I'm far enough into my Q4 story to have the first 450 words of it critiqued. Who's up for a swap?

[Grayson Morris]

I'm up for a 450 exchange -- already sent a PM to the last several folks to indicate swap willingness in this thread, happy to be PMed by anyone I missed who'd like to swap.

[Dustin Adams]

Giggity.

[DavidK]

I'm up for a 450 exchange -- already sent a PM to the last several folks to indicate swap willingness in this thread, happy to be PMed by anyone I missed who'd like to swap.

If my PM didn't work - I got it

[Kevin Ikenberry]

Seems that I now have a Q4 story complete and ready to submit.

If anyone has the time to review this 450, I would be thrilled and gladly look at theirs in return.

You've got my email address - send it to me, I'll be happy to look over it for you.

[DavidK]

Seems that I now have a Q4 story complete and ready to submit.

If anyone has the time to review this 450, I would be thrilled and gladly look at theirs in return.

You've got my email address - send it to me, I'll be happy to look over it for you.

Thanks Kevin - will do :)

[Kevin Ikenberry]

Seems that I now have a Q4 story complete and ready to submit.

If anyone has the time to review this 450, I would be thrilled and gladly look at theirs in return.

You've got my email address - send it to me, I'll be happy to look over it for you.

Thanks Kevin - will do :)

Back in your inbox now, David. Well done!

Kevin

[Jackie B.]

Anybody up for a swap? PM me :)

[johncdla]

Anybody up for a swap? PM me :)

Jackie,

I am looking for someone to exchange critiques with. How do you normally go about doing that? I want to submit my science fiction story this quarter. It would be nice to continue the revision process with someone providing useful input.

John

[Jackie B.]

I sent you a private message, John. I'm happy to give your story a read

[MHunterJones]

Count me in for Q4. SF here, but I'm perfectly happy to read fantasy, too.

[Travesty]

I'm up for a 450 swap, PM me if interested :) (Let me know if you want to do something longer, I'm up to 3k words for my Q4 so far, anything up to that)

[kairi]

I'm new to the comp and the board, but keen to swap a first 450 critique. If anyone willing could PM me, I'd be a very happy little vegemite.

[DavidK]

I'm new to the comp and the board, but keen to swap a first 450 critique. If anyone willing could PM me, I'd be a very happy little vegemite.

I'll do a 450 word swap for you, Kairi. I'm concerned about your use of the term "vegemite" because that word will cause a LOT of the members to cringe with revulsion.

You shouldn't mention it, but equally it *might* be okay and it will allow you to cringe when some start talking about S'mores :)

PM'd

[kairi]

Thanks, David. I think I just PM'd you...tried to, at any rate:)

Cheers,
Kylie

[Dustin Adams]

I'm ready.
Speak to me, people.

[DavidK]

I'm ready.
Speak to me, people.

Dustin,
hit send and I'll take a look