First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby Brydar » Fri Apr 24, 2015 2:02 pm

I beat my deadline by about 5 minutes! It may not be perfect but I got the first 450 of my story out to those listed above via PM. Please let me know if you have any problems reading it. I am anxious to read your 450's folks, you may PM me back or e-mail me; Brydar at Yahoo dot com.
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby jMiriah » Sat May 23, 2015 3:53 pm

Hey, is anyone else interested in a new round of first-450 exchange?
If so, PM me. Thanks!
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby elratliff » Thu Jun 11, 2015 4:23 pm

Hello all,

This is my first time doing WotF, and I'd like to swap my first 450 with someone(s) for feedback.
PM me if interested. Thanks!
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby Dustin Adams » Tue Jun 16, 2015 12:34 pm

Ellie,

Received. Will look it over soon!
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby Dustin Adams » Tue Jul 14, 2015 11:12 am

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Anyone willing to review a prelim 450 (460 actually) for my possible Q1?
Am of course happy to exchange, even a non-wotf if that's all you have available.
Or a flash/complete.
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby elratliff » Tue Jul 14, 2015 2:08 pm

Dustin Adams wrote:.
Anyone willing to review a prelim 450 (460 actually) for my possible Q1?
Am of course happy to exchange, even a non-wotf if that's all you have available.
Or a flash/complete.


I'll look at it, Dustin, without the exchange. You've got my email. I don't have anything of my own ready at the moment. wotf001
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby elratliff » Wed Aug 05, 2015 2:39 pm

I just looked at my calendar and realized we'll be midway through Q4 next weekend. Anyone up for a round of first-450 critique exchanges the weekend of Aug 15th-16th?

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Just to clarify what I'd meant by "the weekend": Send me your first 450 by 11:59pm PST Friday, and I'll have your feedback done by 11:59pm PST Sunday.
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby Galen » Thu Aug 06, 2015 12:47 pm

Good thought. I would be keen to collaborate in a 450 critique exchange. Pretty much anytime works for me.
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby elratliff » Mon Aug 10, 2015 1:38 am

Galen - I've sent you an email!
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Galen
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby Galen » Mon Aug 10, 2015 4:34 am

Great! I've sent it over just because I was at it, but your timeline is just fine by me.
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby Ivy Fairhaven » Wed Sep 02, 2015 8:46 pm

Hello!

Is anyone else looking to exchange the first 450 for Q4? wotf007 If you are, please let me know with a PM.


Thank you!
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby elratliff » Fri Sep 18, 2015 9:00 am

I could use another first 450 exchange. PM me if interested! Thanks!
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby Dustin Adams » Fri Oct 23, 2015 10:10 am

I'm ready.
You?
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby glenn84 » Sun Dec 27, 2015 1:39 pm

Anyone still need to do a last minute exchange?
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby Dustin Adams » Fri Jun 03, 2016 12:15 pm

No one has posted in this thread since December?
Or is my Internetweb being funky?

Anyway, with 1 month left, my inbox is open. For a swap - or just a read. I'm up for either if you don't have time to read, but want eyes on your start.
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby elratliff » Mon Mar 06, 2017 12:47 pm

Anyone interested in a first-450 exchange this weekend (Mar. 11-12)? If you send me something by 11:59pm PST Friday, I'll have your feedback done by 11:59pm PST Sunday.
SHM x 1, R x 2

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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby jficke13 » Wed Apr 05, 2017 4:18 pm

Anyone else feel a kick in the patoot from the end of last quarter and the awards riding some creativity into the beginning of this quarter?

I'm up for a (very) early first 450 word exchange if there are any takers?
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby J'nae Rae » Wed Apr 05, 2017 9:06 pm

I'm up to it. I have story originally started for this quarter before I had a dry spell after my Best Friend passed. I ended up cleaning up a submission that was rejected for an anthology for Q2 instead.

So, PM me the file and I'll see about PMing you mine.
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby Dustin Adams » Fri Apr 28, 2017 7:22 am

Let's do this!

Send me a PM for a 450 or 1k exchange for Q3.

Let's make finalist!!!
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby elratliff » Mon Jul 10, 2017 1:54 pm

My Q4 story is nowhere near started yet, but I'll be happy to exchange 450 critiques with anyone this quarter. So PM/email me if you have one ready, and I will send mine as soon as I have something written!
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