First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

For confidential exchange of story critiques
Corbin Maxwell
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby Corbin Maxwell » Fri Jun 07, 2019 4:33 pm

You’ve read for me. Mostly I’m worried about the first paragraph. I’ll send it to you later. Thanks.
For there is death in the sound of it, and a glamorous fatality, like silver pennons downrushing at sunset, or a dying fall of horns along the road to Ronceveaux.

The only easy day was yesterday.




SF x 1
HM x 10

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KD Lightle
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby KD Lightle » Fri Jun 07, 2019 6:49 pm

Corbin Maxwell wrote:It kinda feels like I’m being given the silent treatment for some reason. Like I got wished into the cornfield.


I'm not ignoring you!!! I'm just busily trying to finish this Quarter's story!!!!!
Reality can be beaten with enough imagination - Mark Twain.

Corbin Maxwell
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby Corbin Maxwell » Fri Jun 07, 2019 6:56 pm

Understood.
For there is death in the sound of it, and a glamorous fatality, like silver pennons downrushing at sunset, or a dying fall of horns along the road to Ronceveaux.

The only easy day was yesterday.




SF x 1
HM x 10

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glenn84
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby glenn84 » Tue Jul 02, 2019 9:56 am

Anyone willing to swap the first 450 or so words for their Q4? Send me a PM if interested.
HM x 7
SHM x 1
R - unknown

EDF

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Thomas Woodward
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby Thomas Woodward » Wed Jul 03, 2019 5:54 pm

I'm also interested in swapping 450s for Q4 - please pm me
3x R
5x HM

"No subject is terrible if the story is true, if the prose is clean and honest, and if it affirms courage and grace under pressure." — Ernest Hemingway

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RSchibler
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges

Postby RSchibler » Wed Jul 03, 2019 5:58 pm

I know I didn’t get back to a few people on requests - we’ve had an unusually stressful year - but all of you are welcome to shoot me your 450s. Best,
Trying to refute entropy with words.

Vol34: R, HM, R
Vol35: HM, R, R, HM
Vol36: R, pending, pending

ALWAYS available for critiques. PM me.


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