First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges
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Andy Dibble
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges
Anyone should feel free to PM me their story to critique, first 450 or longer. I may ask you to critique a comparable portion of a story of mine.
35.2 R
35.3 R
35.4 R
36.1 First Place
Most Recent - Simultaneous Times (https://www.podomatic.com/podcasts/spacecowboybooks/episodes/2020-10-15T00_08_06-07_00/ (at 12:01) Text: https://andydibble.com/2020/11/03/trial-in-majority/)
35.3 R
35.4 R
36.1 First Place
Most Recent - Simultaneous Times (https://www.podomatic.com/podcasts/spacecowboybooks/episodes/2020-10-15T00_08_06-07_00/ (at 12:01) Text: https://andydibble.com/2020/11/03/trial-in-majority/)
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Dustin Adams
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges
SCAFontaine wrote:If anyone is willing, I have a first 450 that I'd like someone to look at and tell me what they think.
Ready!
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SCAFontaine
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges
Dustin Adams wrote:Ready!
Thanks Dustin,
I sent you an email.5 x HM
2 x R
2 x R
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Corbin Maxwell
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges
Anyone up for a 450?
For there is death in the sound of it, and a glamorous fatality, like silver pennons downrushing at sunset, or a dying fall of horns along the road to Ronceveaux.
The only easy day was yesterday.
SF x 1
SHM x 3
HM x 10
The only easy day was yesterday.
SF x 1
SHM x 3
HM x 10
Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges
I am down. I may need to catch up on the rules here. But I am open to a swap. 
HMx5
There is no Frigate like a Book
To take us Lands away
- Emily Dickinson
There is no Frigate like a Book
To take us Lands away
- Emily Dickinson
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Corbin Maxwell
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges
sorte001 wrote:I am down. I may need to catch up on the rules here. But I am open to a swap.
I don't think there's many rules to a 450 swap. My email is corbin.maxwell@yahoo.com
Thank you.
For there is death in the sound of it, and a glamorous fatality, like silver pennons downrushing at sunset, or a dying fall of horns along the road to Ronceveaux.
The only easy day was yesterday.
SF x 1
SHM x 3
HM x 10
The only easy day was yesterday.
SF x 1
SHM x 3
HM x 10
Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges
Looking for a first 450 swap if anyone is willing.
v36 Q1, Q3 - HM; Q4 - R
v37 Q1 - R; Q2 - SHM
v37 Q1 - R; Q2 - SHM
Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges
czing wrote:Looking for a first 450 swap if anyone is willing.
I'll PM you with my email address :)
HMx5
There is no Frigate like a Book
To take us Lands away
- Emily Dickinson
There is no Frigate like a Book
To take us Lands away
- Emily Dickinson
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Corbin Maxwell
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges
czing wrote:Looking for a first 450 swap if anyone is willing.
If you want, I'll swap with you. Email me at: corbin.maxwell@yahoo.com
Thank you,
For there is death in the sound of it, and a glamorous fatality, like silver pennons downrushing at sunset, or a dying fall of horns along the road to Ronceveaux.
The only easy day was yesterday.
SF x 1
SHM x 3
HM x 10
The only easy day was yesterday.
SF x 1
SHM x 3
HM x 10
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Dustin Adams
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Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges
Popping in with a link - in case anyone missed the Kitchen Sink post:
viewtopic.php?f=19&t=8050
There's a small group of us who plan to write 1-3 NEW 450 word story openers over the next three months.
The idea is to hone our story-opening skills through writing-reading-critiquing a story's first two pages.
Sign up below if interested!
viewtopic.php?f=19&t=8050
There's a small group of us who plan to write 1-3 NEW 450 word story openers over the next three months.
The idea is to hone our story-opening skills through writing-reading-critiquing a story's first two pages.
Sign up below if interested!
Re: First Four-Fifty Critique Exchanges
Corbin Maxwell wrote:czing wrote:Looking for a first 450 swap if anyone is willing.
If you want, I'll swap with you. Email me at: corbin.maxwell@yahoo.com
Thank you,
Work has super ramped up the stress levels so I haven't been able to tweak my story based on my first crit and have a couple crits I've offered out already in my waiting pile. If you are willing to wait until early Nov we could swap then????
v36 Q1, Q3 - HM; Q4 - R
v37 Q1 - R; Q2 - SHM
v37 Q1 - R; Q2 - SHM
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